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No one is ever worth the taking of your life. Sometimes the pain and hurt are so great that you may think so, but it never is.

Flames of despair and anger are out of control Like a virus you wiped out my will to live/ ...................................................... Sincere poems.... Good passages... 10... Tsira

your poems really ample in emotion. i love the rythm and feeling you put into each and everyone of them. I look forward to see how you expand your writing to simple things because i beleive your the kind of writer that can make small things very beautiful and interesting with your words. keep up the great work! ! much respect.

you write well beyond your years...a gift indeed...I hope to read more from you....put down that metaphorical gun, there's too much yet to see...great work

I trust you are only IMAGINING what can happen at the hands of a femme fatale! Very intense, expressive poetry. Excellent.

love this one... :) i give u a ten

A moving composition with with wonderful metaphors,10 for it.

amazingly good write dude and grreat rrhymes as im rhymes fan i like the way of your writing.....i kill myself evvertime i write any poem and thats a different pleasure..write dude, write your feelings, emotions a pen dip in the ink of tears and blood of broken heart and put it in the book of shatterred dreams...thanks

Wow, greatly written! I love it! ! ! :) But no need to hurt yourself!

This poem was written with such depth of feeling! but no one, no one on this earth is worth your life! You are a poet! put your feelings into words, that way we all win, regards Bob

This poem of yours sparkles with intensity. Very well penned and thank you for writing such a beautiful poem.

TJ Hearts and women make fools of us all the time build a little wall around the heart, you are young you can take it away brick by brick as you progress in life, then when true love comes you will have a nice warm heart to take it, good write enjoyed it carry on friend. Always here for a chat Chris 10

And now that you have written this all out, you can begin a new life, it's a start..... The turmoil & torture of this poor soul is painfully & perfectly told in this poem 10