Thursday, January 20, 2011

In Memories With You (The End) Comments

Rating: 4.4

Revisiting our past days
Holding time together
The album of memories says...
Beautiful pieces to remember
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Dev Anand 15 November 2018

The memories with you I just cant stop thinking Because i am In memories with you...how can i ever forget you and your love., a fine romantic and love poem. thank u dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

It is a beautiful poem on memories having stunning expression and nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Memories! With the muse of our past days. Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

hmmmmm...I was thinking of something then those numbers hehehheehe

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2013

a beautiful write in memories of you. ending the year

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Memories though are short-lived...they add to life.....you taught this once again.Another excellent piece to explore.

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Kiran Sam 21 June 2011

Enjoyed it, like ur many other poems of romantic genre.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 February 2011

beautifully refective...beautifully romantic...beautiful painting on a solid canvas

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 January 2011

But something still alive The memories with you.. Fantastic writing with so many oft quoted lines within it, it will perhaps give fire to the poet also to live loudly after finishing 2011,12.........to its extreme. As a reader we get the force of living together inside a society, inside a home, inside an earth also. Thank you the soul, try to write yourself more and more with the love and passions of life. Regards, pranab 10++

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Nimal Dunuhinga 23 January 2011

A beautiful canvas of an unwritten soul, bittersweet memories in its true colours and it's already framed in our hearts!

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Terence George Craddock 22 January 2011

'The album of memories says'... behold poetry beauty of unwritten soul 10+++ Universe Embraces Written Souls Turn album of memories holds time in our hands heart throbs paint images we ran our souls in light as we ran wet flow fingers through paint breath canvas deep colours blaze in hues shape soul gift open flowers we set flower sails on water streams sparkle seed shapes ripples ride diamond light river celebrations perfume daylight candles warm birth womb night our souls hold time in serenity star smiles illuminate light sky pulse in glow depths time space spreads shadows veils shimmer black lace spreads wind ripples beautifies bodies breath bright beauty ripe graces eyes beholders bliss embrace heaven sung melody sparkle eyes thrill flash flesh radiant blows soft whispers into comic seas angels sing joy celebrate soul maker. Dedicated to Unwritten Soul Copyright © Terence George Craddock

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Kevin Carney 21 January 2011

Such a beautiful poem I understand a lot now. I really wish I had read this earlier. Such a sad poem to end 2010. You silled you heart and open your soul. The beauty anjd sadness and the rhyme and reason, you should never let go. Look forward to great and new horizons in 2011 it is there for the taking...

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