Like stars that live then die their fiery death,
you, sister, ripped from me so suddenly
departed long, too long, no words, no breath
to say goodbye to loving family.
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This is a heavy trip. Sometimes it becomes so obvious that, past a certain point, life will never make sense again, but we don't have the option of just stopping everything there.
This poem filled with cherish the memory of a deceased person. I felt deep impression. Your opem have deep and a passion so it is excellent. I think that you are good poet. This poem's score is most highest score. It is 10