In Me You Shall Remain Comments

This was quite a beautiful poem. Everyone that leaves you is always in you, it seems like a beautiful glint of hope that even if our beloved ones never meet us they're always with us. There is such an amazing connection between you, your family and this person you love. There's a depth here unlike any of the poems I've ever written, which are always quite observant and speculative of a large picture, so that's why I liked this a lot.

Today i am no scarce in lucre Grown-up in words and gentle in attire Unaware of the falling of those rupee notes from hands I look upto horizon, if you are somewhere near Please poet no need of looking up at the horizon, just look within you, just dip within your breath, just catch hold within the tips of your nail. Who He is so dear, can't live so far. Need a bit belief. Notes are not necessary object to touch Him, so let it drop, you have your own soul yet, so strength is there. Alive..and Alive is the last word to utter. Beautiful writing. You have crafted an age with its passions and agony very skillfully. Write more.....Live long..... Regards, 10++ pranab

‘We were born to meet each other’ ~ Born and programmed to be of each other in union and separation…crossing the fragile boundaries of mortality and into enter Eternality ‘Venky writes to each of his friend, In me you shall remain In me you shall remain’ ~! 100% sure and certain yours ‘You’ and you are but ‘One Unit Unison’ Poetry wrung from deepest feelings of heart …moving and touching….thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10