Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
Friday, October 24, 2014

In Love You Take To Lap Comments

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Take us in to your lap of oh God father,
Teach us values every day to recover.
Sins are increasing at the rate on Earth,
Many of have forgotten purpose of birth.
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Geetha Jayakumar 25 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines.... Running behind mirage we have lost all, Due to this we move towards sin and fall. Very true said, we all run behind mirages to accomplish our dreams, may be in this process many sins are committed and humanity is lost from this world forever. I loved the way you presented it. Thank you.

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Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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