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Monday, June 4, 2012

In Love With A Friend Comments

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the sun glisting on your skin
the wind in your hair
the smile on your face
the warm embrace you give me
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Adeline Foster 04 June 2012

What a true pouring out of your heart. May I mention a few hints. The 'we' in line seven could be a contraction (we're) . In line 12 the 'you'll' already containes the 'will'. Otherwise a good poem. Read mine - Sympathetic Pain - Adeline

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