'In Love For You' Comments

i like this poem alot, you really write beautifully, and i think that alot of your readers, myself included can relate to alot of the situations you write about, especially this one. being in love alone is a terrible thing. since you critiqued me, im going to take this opportunity to return the favor. double negatives are not good! when you use two negative words next to each other, it contradicts the statement, making it positive. for example, you wrote: 'i thought i wouldn't never fall in love' wouldn't is a compound, which breaks down into 'would not' so you technically wrote: 'i thought that i would not never fall in love' which means, 'i thought i would fall in love' what you should've said was: 'i thought that i would never fall in love' which is the message you were trying to say. other than that, this has become a favorite of mine. props: ]