In Love Comments

Love life for better thoughts ot live in harmony

the conclusion of the matter: love is fun

What makes a poem a good poem, I believe, is the use of clear concrete images which can contribute to the building up of the writer's message. I think this is one area which is really good in your poem here. Keep on writing.

Yes love has many aspects... it gives us joy n pain at the same time... nicely expressed...

Love is very mysterious. None can force it. It's an unpredictable experience with multishades. For someone it's sweet, for other bitter. Really.

The essence of the feelings really important to awake the sensation, as if love in the sun is the shine, it give powers to bright in the dime universe..as if the sun lost it, cold and dark, that will surround us...if the love from the sun touch the moon, so awake the soul of the moon to bright the night with a touch of sun's love....when hearts understand of different souls to be one misty body, complimentary is important to fit what it can touch, as can endure the pain it should cost....after all love is a part of mystery as it involve invisible, ethereal body_Unwritten soul