Friday, January 25, 2013

In Light Rhymes Comments

Rating: 4.5

The leaves fall on the ground with wonder grace
Why do you turn pages with so much seriousness?
In a light mood and with the children's rhymes schemes
Importance of life can be written with out grim face.
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Abdul Wahab
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Shahzia Batool 27 January 2013

life is a game fully to be played, two things are needed: one needs to know the rules of the game, and, sportsman spirit! ! ! the first line is very poetic! The leaves fall on the ground with wonder grace!

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Soulful Heart 26 January 2013

optimistic and flowing smoothly.....................nice write

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 25 January 2013

Life is a game! The experience depends upon what type of game we like to play! I imagine if I were a bull fighter, how would I manage my life. I agree with your opinion here. Well written! 10

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Kavya . 25 January 2013

v nice...i liked the last line especially, Serious of serious things can be told in light rhymes!

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