In Life What Did I Gain? Comments

We must accept joys, sorrows and everything in life sans calculating what did I gain at the end of the day. This poem has a lot of poetic depth... appreciated.

Back with a bang...my dear friend. Amazing flow n rhythm of thoughts n feelings that the reader can relate to n find comfort in. A superb write. Top marks!

I sense the great pain you experience! The inner agony finds such poignant expression in this poem! At times we have to drink the cup of sorrow, but believe that God is on our side and He will help you find a way out! Who can say after this bout of sorrow, there will not flow a silvery stream of joy! Great write!

SO is the life, we know not and keep wondering where we went wrong and at times we and those close to us vouch for us saying You did nothing wrong yet God knows the best what He wants you to learn, Like too much sweet fruit invites insects/decay. Take everything in stride without losing your heart, there is a light at the end of every tunnel. A thought provoking poem, Keep writing and flushing your sorrow, We all care for our intelligent and matured poetess, Aarzoo.

I'm finding my strength in seclution! However, there is a way for tomorrow; after past memories. What is my fault in this life? ! ! That is always the question; but hope lies ahead of you. DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Move on with a strong heart.

when hurt and sad we seek answers. Some time there is none but to express and accept pain. Poetry lets us do it.

Many times, in many lives it is wondered if it was worth it, and what was gained