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In Life Comments
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In Life
In childhood you're playful.
In youth you are lustful.
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7/30/2025 3:46:07 AM # 1.0.0
Hexasyllabic is six syllables per line. Well done. If I were to add a fourth line, I would change the period at the end of line three to a comma, and my fourth line would be 'and also forgetful.'
I do have a fourth line, 'In death you are peaceful.' To me it didn't fit with in life.