Saturday, May 27, 2006

In Kansas Comments

Rating: 2.5

spring flows all around us or ought to
each field of corn is taut
with its arrows and bows
our hands can't contain
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Mike Finley
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Joyce Chelmo 27 May 2006

Hi Mike... love your descriptives in this poem. Kansas is a lot like North Dakota with it's flat fields. Joyce

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Duncan Wyllie 27 May 2006

Lets hope for a safe landing then Mike Anyway, I thought this bit was brilliant: 'living outside the retina like a secret' Sometimes it can be the smallest of things that we say that can have the most impact Love Duncan x

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