In Joy And Sorrow Comments

brightness at first...then the clouds...now the torrent tear rains...expressive write on the vagaries of life Maria...thanks...10

Joy and sorrow is lined perfectly. Well done.

Clouds of gloom have come to fill the air... For family love and joy of life She keeps struggling without a strife Always facing it without despair! sure, joys and sorrows go side by side and its called the routine of life..its really a good and interesting poem and i enjoyed alot and let me say..friend..you did a good job and have got goot idea in this rich poem..inspiring and impressing..even much meaningful too 10/10

a very fine poem indeed