In January it's so nice,
While slipping on the sliding ice,
To sip hot chicken soup with rice.
Sipping once, sipping twice,
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alliteration suits slipping and sliding on the ice and then warming up the body by sipping hot chicken soup. This little poem is expertly crafted
This is really a lovely poem showing how the biting chill could be set off effectively with the help of simple things just as hot chicken soup. Excellent expression with perfect rhyme. Thanks.
A short and sweet poem, can be a darling of children. Thanks for sharing.
Maurice you could join my tribe..eating arozcaldo i love that too
n January it's so nice, While slipping on the sliding ice, To sip hot chicken soup with rice.
ice and rice are very nice with your chicken soup laced with spice! Good job! ! !
A children's poem by a writer of children's books. It does have some nice rhyming and makes me hungry for some chicken soup with rice.
Your poem delightful to read aloud, evoking the warmth and nostalgia of childhood. With just a few lines, you capture the essence of winter's chill and the simple joy of a warm bowl of soup.To sip hot chicken soup with rice.