Tuesday, September 26, 2006

In Ice Lies Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

this floor is frozen with cold
and
the windows have
jack frosts
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Ben Partenay
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Steffi Webster 28 April 2008

Magic written in words capture a note difficult to describe. Phenomenal achievement. Some of your work makes me want to snap my pencils and give up writing forever in the face of such splendour that I cannot hope to compete with. Wonderful. xxx

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 04 October 2006

A phenomenal expression of life… better then a 10 Ben… how about an 11!

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Ernestine Northover 26 September 2006

You of the warm heart, this is a lovely poem, and what memories of the art of Jack Frost, something people these days miss sadly. The artwork was unbelievably beautiful, way back. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Melanie Emiko 26 September 2006

Well written. Can picture it out all through, including the fire in your heart. Thanks for sharing Ben.

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