Why are you so heartless?
You tell me you love me, so careless
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i consider this is your poem which carry lighter words but yet heavy in overall meaning. Love can be fatal as goes to mine story. the Last and utimate love just for and from God.
A lovely poem narrated through the prism of 'All for Christ and Nothing' stands the reason for 'In Hopeless[less] Love'...your 'Less' words rhymes and are so pleasing. This is a lovely poem...I give 10+++