Tuesday, June 20, 2006

In His Shack Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seasonal sea breeze peeps
through the broken windows.
The old sailor rests on a hammock
and the torn World map on the wall
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nimal dunuhinga
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David Tanguay 25 June 2006

This sounds to me like an old lonely sailor longing for the sea. Where memories of his youth he hungers for. (Could that lonely old sailer be you?)

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Amanda Lukas 20 June 2006

I love it, Nimal. This really is a 'word painting'.

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Sandra Fowler 20 June 2006

Nimal, I am enchanted by this wonderful word painting.It is one of your very best efforts. Encore! Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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