In His Heart A Golden Chair Comments

lovely imagery written well

Well written, lovely imagery

… my lady doth sleep, deeply sleep in heart of chair as the magic calling her little one...very deep, deeply sleep in my heart ....in my heart a golden chair ….in this lines something reminded me of my favorite fairy tales…and it was lovely. However, there are incantations in it- the charm of death/ ignorance (deep sleep): the spell of malicious/ deceitful state of ‘being’ (golden chair) . Anyhow it was just my interpretation of the imagery mentioned above. But all of it beautiful poem.

Sista this one is sublime! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I loved it! ! ! ! !

TaMaRa, please, please, write this way always, so pure, so moving, so refreshing, so.., so.., so enchanting. Beautiful, stirs the soul, captures the spirit of what life's all about. My 10 here given mark

intresting..very well written..it was good-10

i like it, it pretty good,10++++++++

a good piece with interesting logic and heart feeling meaningful idea.. liked it 10/10

Swings and sings. A lot like Camelot.

This was pleasant with a sing-song quality about it. Very different. thanks

Very nice write indeed. I remember the feelings well keep it up.

From : Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems) (Guildford United Kingdom; Male; 39) To : TaMaRa HaNaRinG ******SeeKinG JuStiCe AnD P Date Time : 8/27/2009 7: 06: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: It's a nice poem... i like the smell of jasmine and sea breezes...

very wonderful writing. keep it up.

this is a wonderful and lovely poem...10+

night when so young in its limitless florescence grace of beauty yet waits to embrace luscious glow dancing over the lips of thirst of to be emblazoned..................most fascinating story of love, ingeniously curved over the cravings of heart by resilience,10++++++, thanks for sharing

Those are the Golden nuggets from the abode of the soul and with one flight the suitor finds solace in the arms of the sweet love.Sweetly and carefully written poem.

A time comes along when a poem has that something special and boy has this got that, this is the best you have wrote to date Light and shade, story line, clever plot no need to write what you have said.weeeeeeell done++++++++100 regards

i see this poem in two different lights. one is a knight in shining armour, saving the lovely damsel. then the end of the poem - i see a father with his child in a rocking chair carrying the child to far away places. either way, it is a beautiful write and touching. A TEN

A beautiful poem like a fascinating arab night while flying on a magic carpet.10

well done, madam! I'm glad I read this. Thanks for sharing.