Tuesday, March 4, 2008

! ! In His Eyes, His Eyes Comments

Rating: 3.3

His open eyes, one catching the sun,
shining towards me – presumably
they still function optically:
recording, unmoved, unmoving, my presence;
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Michael Shepherd
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 04 March 2008

Everything about this poem is perfect... except where it resides now. It should be in an Anthology, The Best British Poems of 2008, along with the other living greats.

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Vidyadhar ... 04 March 2008

I greet you with all my praise for this good poem.

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Michael Shepherd

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