In his eyes I see
the pain
the rejection
I want to make it better
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He sounds like someone who cannot take the last step! An excellent poem -
Yes that was what the poem was about. Sometimes one is not strong or too fearful to make changes.
Heartfelt poem. When someone remains Aloof by why not understanding the pain of other It does happen, in relationship one should have this kind of understanding 5***
Difficult to help the one who blocks your help...great poem Aqua
'but he only lets me stop the bleeding never to heal the wound' - very well described. He is perhaps not sure about himself.