Tuesday, October 20, 2020

In His Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.8

In his eyes I see
the pain
the rejection
I want to make it better
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Aqua Flower
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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2020

'but he only lets me stop the bleeding never to heal the wound' - very well described. He is perhaps not sure about himself.

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Yiyan Han 31 October 2020

Well depicted a heartfelt one of 5+

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Carl Roussell 22 October 2020

He sounds like someone who cannot take the last step! An excellent poem -

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Aqua Flower 11 November 2020

Yes that was what the poem was about. Sometimes one is not strong or too fearful to make changes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 October 2020

A well expressed poem. Truly heartfelt..5 stars*****

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Aqua Flower 24 October 2020

Thank you Bernard and hope you are staying safe!

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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2020

Heartfelt poem. When someone remains Aloof by why not understanding the pain of other It does happen, in relationship one should have this kind of understanding 5***

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Kostas Lagos 20 October 2020

Difficult to help the one who blocks your help...great poem Aqua

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