Wednesday, December 17, 2008

In His Eyes Comments

Rating: 3.0

In his eyes are empty wells
where waters only flow endless
when I stare.
And in his eyes are dark skies
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Jonathan Platt 27 January 2013

You've dug deep within and pulled out a gem- this poem sparkles.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

i remember the famous lines of David Copperfield- think of me at my best...here, you love you think best of him at his worst...you only 'living in his soul' make him best, Jane...good poem...10

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