in his country:
things try to cross the borders
but it is borders,
which are..
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Back to the poem hunter and you dropp a special poem...i really wonderful one, deep meaning, philosophical fillings, and heart revealed feelings...To see wrong to be right is always confusing same as right to be wrong..The exchange of the reality to fantasy now really happened? Hope we not living in fairy tale where everywhere just full with lies...But yeah we still here to defend what white must call white and the black should call black...we need to clarify this...and you point the good sight Ahmed, nice poem..really! _Unwritten Soul
I love philosophies and this one is one of the best. Yes, things are always wrong and backwards and no matter what you do it is always going to be that way. Great poem with a better message! !
please good people, whoever, whatever and wherever you are, be aware that a true philosopher, writes not for special, he writes for general, this is the true philosophy you must know, and you should know further that love is the philosophy of all philosophies...therefore love for you...love for you...
Wellwoven absurdities portraying the negative vibrations that fight positive dreams and delight in fomenting chaos.
Great poem ~! with some invisible power that tells the truth in a bright way...nice one ~! !
A wonderful message. Dreams are sometimes murdered before they are born. I love this.
Very nicely written with cryptic layers that translate to a strong message..good write.
A very good and strong poem. A great write about things people Should know about. Fantastic.
In this country I'd gladly live. Equality for all would be a dream come true...very great poem!
Hi Ahmed, The truth rings loudly from your words, thanks for your invitation to read your work. Peace.
Oh dear which is your country? Your words are good for the entire world, maybe if we could live without borders thanmaybe we wouldn't have so many aches. I cannot do nothing other than send my good thoughts and prayers of love. Good poem, I feel it with my heart but my brain can't understand, are there more horrible than usual things happening?
This poem is truly amazing, such a wise poet you are. :) True skill is put into each one of your works. Well done.
Wow! Very deep! I like it! Great work!