Friday, September 25, 2009

In Her Wild Blue Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

In her wild blue eyes glitters lovely stars.........

In emerald and silky white
a mayhem in me thundered to pour
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Justin Strength 19 November 2009

Smile smile I do even on the second read!

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Justin Strength 19 November 2009

Very nice write, though there are parts I don't understand, I just SMILE..... Wonderful writing!

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Ejaz Khan 27 September 2009

A beautiful write, smooth, senseous and shimmering and most of all remains a sober poem!

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

In the pool of feels and images..............Great write! ! !

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Tango 25 September 2009

This is a very sensuous poem, and very well put. Tango.

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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