Sunday, November 6, 2011

In Her Garden Comments

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That night
She took them all in
A shamble of strangers
And shone them a garden
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Dean Meredith
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2020

The young showed veins Pulsing with truth As her friend shared her bosom She the enchantress Collected their souls...... very fine expressions dear Dean Meredith. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 March 2020

Confused egos with halos While lost Magdalenes Sang sad distant dirges By the fading light Of Kafka. Mentioning great names of literature you made this poem a marvel. thank u. tony

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