In Her Eyes Comments

troubling and deep mood. strong form and work. -Tailor

HEATHER...FINELY CRAFTED WORK...ALL BASIC PRINCIPLES OF VERSE HAVE BEEN COMMENDABLY MET...GOOD SEQUENCE WORK AS WELL AS USE OF IMAGEWORX...ALL AROUND SOLID WORK....'''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR''''''''''''''

This is very well written and conveys so much. the beginning is excellent it lulls the reader into a false sense of security with laughing and bright then draws them into a much darker poem. Very well done Seamus