In Haiku/ Senryu - My Complete Story Comments

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I LOVE your poem. I like that you did NOT force yourself to rhyme throughout, though I DO appreciate good rhyming, which you had. I LOVE the poem and give it 5 stars. *****

desist: 1 definition: 'To cease to proceed or act; to stop; to forbear; -- often with from.' I won't challenge myself to write such a restricting, technically, poem! ;) Nice job.

Wonderful depiction of the intricacies of life and love adorned with the beauty and wonders of nature. A well crafted and executed haiku. Top Marks!

Worthy of n=being selection POTD.

CONGRATULATIONS! ! ! for top Honour Member's POTD.

I visited again this awesome poem with nice imagery. Congrats.

love and hate-both are the grease oil of life! - nice to read your as three liners; congrats for being selected this as POD

Awesome, nice imagery and worth being visited again and again.

love and hate collide, a rollercoaster inside, torn apart, no guide.

All the best to your new venture of haiku series of your story. May your pen (or fingers?) be blessed with Godspeed!

2 on nature 2 on self and pain this is what I like about your poems. Good Job Poetic Sky.