In Golden Years (Hindi Translation Of The Poem By Ms Savita Tyagi) Comments
In Golden Years
Original Poem by Ms Savita Tyagi
Hindi Translation by Rajnish Manga
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I don't know what to add stalwarts have already done her the honours and you sir in equal measure can I ever say lesser or much more the world you does a dore YOUR PATIENCE DILIGENCE AND MARKED TRANSLATION is what makes poet me to both ENGLISH VERSION AND HINDI ENDEAR IN EQUAL MEASURE i SHAN'T SAY FIFTY FIFTY BUT HUNDRED MAY BE Thanks for the English version Hindi mine you know it is tootie fruity lol ji RM AND SAVITA MAA'M
Rajnish ji, this is a wonderful poem. Both the original poem in English by Savita ji and the Hindi translation by you are top class. Like Aniruddha ji says it strikes a chord. In the early years of our lives we are compelled by many situations. It is only during the latter part of our lives that we can sit, ponder and indulge in whatever we like to do..What can be better than poetry? .......10
I fully agree with you. We all are required to take care of our responsibilities at different stages of our life. It is after all this is over, we start looking inward and to spare time in pursuit of our own developmental activities including hobbies which otherwise remained unattended thus far. Thanks, Geeta ji, for a thoughtful review and for all the kind words.
But this freedom comes only past the retirement age! This strikes a chord. I remember when I had suggested half-retirement five years before its time (three days a week working with half the salary) . But it was not to be. The freedom I feel writing poetry compared to analytical stuff based on facts/figures is indescribable. Good original poem and equally good translations.
It's amazing to have you sharing your real life experience or musings about being in a similar situation. Thanks very much, Aniruddha ji, for a fine review of the poem and an appreciative word on its translation.
It's wonderful.tiredness of material stuffs makes us bother but it's the retirement and the latter life that is called golden age, which lets us souring into the heavens above. Very beautiful poem and Hindi translation as well.
That's a very very interesting review of the poem. After a satisfying life during the prime years, it becomes doubly satisfying when leisure and resources are utilized to fulfill one's long cherished dreams. Thanks, Jagdish ji, also for your kind feedback on this translation.
Superb! Thank you so much Rajnish Manga for this beautiful translation. Enjoyed reading it very much in Hindi. will keep it in my poem list.
Thank you so much for your kind words about this translation of your lovely poem. This is no less than a blessing from a senior poet.
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8/1/2025 6:07:31 AM # 1.0.0
Why worry at all? ! Love and Life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.