In God's Garden Canvas (Altered Rondeau) Comments
In God's garden canvas
In God's garden canvas, I am the brush;
each stroke deliberate...I never rush.
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The rhyme and pattern was a little too uneven for me, so I could not give it a reading score. It was quite creative and worthy of some work on that aspect. GW62
Some beautiful language in this one, well done Take care Love duncan X
Harevst the emotions from Renoirs heaart........ An excellent piece of work with good usage metaphor..... Theme is catching with garden of canvas for life.I liked it my 10
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7/20/2025 7:52:33 PM # 1.0.0
Good use of one of my favourite forms