Friday, September 28, 2012

In God I Trust Comments

Rating: 4.2

Eyes closed under the dusty chandeliers
Once so bright and illuminating;
Now, hollowness and desolation is all that appears
'Hell's empty and all the devils are here', said Shakespeare
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Rinki Nandy 02 April 2013

Well...In god I do not trust..is all I got to say dear.

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Vipins Puthooran 23 November 2012

'tis great poem/In God I trust.....

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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 14 October 2012

This is a memorable poem of hope, relying in God. Good written, Ana.

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Mark Dillon 02 October 2012

well written, we all need to believe in some greater power, but we also need to believe in our own inner strengths and the power to instigate change in our destiny.

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Refilwe Maake 02 October 2012

Ana you are a magnificent poet.You have painted a haunting image of a raw, dark, struggling, hopeless soul, and that putting all your trust in God, brings one into complete harmony.

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William Jackson 02 October 2012

I really like the poem until you get to the cutting part. Then you lose me completely, and I no longer can ascertain any universal theme. What you describe is not self immolation but mutilation. You are talented; seek universal archetypes and strike a balance between life and death without the self deprecation.

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Francisca Darko 01 October 2012

It was a great read. You are really talented!

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Dr Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani 28 September 2012

Beautiful. Illusion of love. Happy u r Godfearing. Often birds sans wings think they can fly. Be a diamond.

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