In fields of blue I long to dwell
And frolic ‘neath the sun -
To mingle with the scented air
With each new day begun
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what a rhythm plus the rhyming, , , , , me a fan now, , , , , , , keep writing, , ,
Oh to write with such words of beauty! I bend at knee, and remove my old hat in your honor, for truly you are a real and pure poet. I can find no other words nearly good enough...
What a free spirit you must be. This is ever so sweet. Thank You
I felt the beat and rhythm as i read through those lines....simply refreshing. Thanks.
I love the opening stanza.. and the joy is like dancing in the air, by the step of fumes waltz...you done a beautiful poem, well done again Valerie! _Soul
not a single beat has missed its rhythm...very balanced poem...
An excellent rhyming poem mirroring the beauty of the wonderful nature, exemplifying the victory of the spirit over the senses.Very enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes.
I do indeed love the formality of this poem, like some antique native landscape. You are dressed to the gills, as is your language here. I have been down lately & reading good poetry suffices to keep me alive. Thank you so very much.
beautiful poem conjuring up all the charm of nature with a good message filled my morning...
A very Romantic poem, in the literary sense. It reminds me a bit of Emily Dickinson, but without the slant rhyme. A nice, light-hearted romp. Thanks for sharing.
Oh I want to come and dance with you! You express such a love of nature and its beauty. I can feel the sun and see the haze of warm air. Very enchanting
Excellent poem as always, as you are one of the very best! I love reading your poems, Val, which describe the feeling of each and every word written, and being right there This brings the thoughts of almost garden fairie magic, and the warmth, joy and their wonderful freedom. Thanks for sharing it with us all!
There's a poet called Patience Strong who is famous for writing verses for cards and calendars. I reckon you are a rival Val as your poetry is very similar And just as good too!
Aha a marvelous wishy poem gr8 dreamy within d mortal frame! Its breathtakingly exquisite n remindin us u r a fab rhymer too. Wow!
So beautiful, exquisite, delicate, whimsical, a gem! ! Loved it, inspired write! !
Wow, what a wonderful dream and imagination, Val. Becoming a lovely spirit, how nice, singing and enjoying all the good on earth or in heaven. Excellent poem.
Such a joy to read Valerie