Sunday, November 18, 2012

In Fields Of Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

In fields of blue I long to dwell
And frolic ‘neath the sun -
To mingle with the scented air
With each new day begun
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Valerie Dohren
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Mary Forrester 13 January 2013

Such a joy to read Valerie

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 December 2012

Perfect, as always.

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Kanav Justa 12 December 2012

what a rhythm plus the rhyming, , , , , me a fan now, , , , , , , keep writing, , ,

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Smoky Hoss 06 December 2012

Oh to write with such words of beauty! I bend at knee, and remove my old hat in your honor, for truly you are a real and pure poet. I can find no other words nearly good enough...

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Owain Glyn 02 December 2012

You never know...............I liked it a lot.

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Lyn Paul 01 December 2012

What a free spirit you must be. This is ever so sweet. Thank You

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Spiritual Seeker 29 November 2012

I felt the beat and rhythm as i read through those lines....simply refreshing. Thanks.

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Unwritten Soul 29 November 2012

I love the opening stanza.. and the joy is like dancing in the air, by the step of fumes waltz...you done a beautiful poem, well done again Valerie! _Soul

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Shahzia Batool 28 November 2012

not a single beat has missed its rhythm...very balanced poem...

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 November 2012

An excellent rhyming poem mirroring the beauty of the wonderful nature, exemplifying the victory of the spirit over the senses.Very enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes.

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Stan Petrovich 24 November 2012

I do indeed love the formality of this poem, like some antique native landscape. You are dressed to the gills, as is your language here. I have been down lately & reading good poetry suffices to keep me alive. Thank you so very much.

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Godfrey Morris 23 November 2012

beautiful poem told ever gracefully.

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Prasanna Kumari 21 November 2012

beautiful poem conjuring up all the charm of nature with a good message filled my morning...

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Josh Dinkin 21 November 2012

A very Romantic poem, in the literary sense. It reminds me a bit of Emily Dickinson, but without the slant rhyme. A nice, light-hearted romp. Thanks for sharing.

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Stevie Taite 21 November 2012

Oh I want to come and dance with you! You express such a love of nature and its beauty. I can feel the sun and see the haze of warm air. Very enchanting

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Dee Corpolongo 21 November 2012

Excellent poem as always, as you are one of the very best! I love reading your poems, Val, which describe the feeling of each and every word written, and being right there This brings the thoughts of almost garden fairie magic, and the warmth, joy and their wonderful freedom. Thanks for sharing it with us all!

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Kevin Halls 21 November 2012

There's a poet called Patience Strong who is famous for writing verses for cards and calendars. I reckon you are a rival Val as your poetry is very similar And just as good too!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 November 2012

Aha a marvelous wishy poem gr8 dreamy within d mortal frame! Its breathtakingly exquisite n remindin us u r a fab rhymer too. Wow!

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Hazel Durham 20 November 2012

So beautiful, exquisite, delicate, whimsical, a gem! ! Loved it, inspired write! !

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Hans Vr 20 November 2012

Wow, what a wonderful dream and imagination, Val. Becoming a lovely spirit, how nice, singing and enjoying all the good on earth or in heaven. Excellent poem.

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