Sunday, April 13, 2008

In Exile Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart yearns for my homeland when my spirit felt young and free.
Living in exile in the desert, I thirst.

Shallow breaths taken further and further apart.A shell left dying.
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Vonda Overlie
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Inveterating write, young lady....well constructed....i like your employment of the alternating stanzaec from couplet to single line....Very Well Done, indeed, Vonda! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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