Sunday, September 16, 2012

In Every Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

there is a moment just before darkness,
when every sound is amplified.
when the senses come alive,
and smell and taste take bodies.
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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

very lovely... the silent touch of the Divine

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Danny Draper 19 September 2012

An intricate and empassioned write, tired exhaustion and resignation that a beaten soul may find refuge and sanctuary, if only in death.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 18 September 2012

Brilliant as usual sir, you poetry is just one of a kind.

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Smoky Hoss 18 September 2012

You've here penned another beauty! So good. absolutely love this, especially the last two lines.

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Dave Walker 18 September 2012

A really fantastic poem, I really love this one.

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Karen Sinclair 18 September 2012

Eric this really touched the very core of me in a most profound and beautiful way...it is just so perfectly compiled and every single word followed with such a burst of meaning and laid such beautiful visuals down which i understood in my world...i wish i could write like this i truly do....an outstanding write....stashed in my favourites as this is true poetry of the highest calibre tyvm karen

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Valerie Dohren 17 September 2012

It is said that the darkest hour is just before dawn - when all will be revealed. A beautiful write here Eric.

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