~ In Euphonic Yo-Yo ~ Comments

Very good message for modern world Where we're swallowed by tension...hedonistic society propelling us for never ending more Max of 10+ I voted for Carry on Ms. Niv to enlighten us with your poetic feelings

Piece with a prescription [psychic counsellings] who are in Global Depression... '...Gleam n’ glow n’ wallow In bedecked minstrel Yoo Hoo Dance douse with Divine Billow....' ~ This the benchmark of this poem for antidoting depression In these days we rarely get broad smile only measured and after thought smile....spontaneity missing Feel the wallow in Divine Billow...great line I'm sorry I missed this beautiful poem..also I'm dismayed by handful of comments...great 10++

nice emotions reflected through this poem. thanks for sharing.

Nicely penned poem here! I can definitely feel the emotion here! Keep writing poetry!

It's a roller coaster ride, great rythym and rhyme. It was so easy to read it was almost like there was music built in to it. Great write.

hi Niv, i wish it was so easy to swallow the pain and sorrow.