Saturday, October 3, 2009

In Essence Comments

Rating: 4.8

Here I am, patiently
Delineating the boundaries
Among the centrifugal forces
Touching my now complex life
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Romeo Della Valle
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Noel Horlanda 05 October 2009

In essence all facts mentioned are honest and true. This piece is well crafted.10+

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Ramin Chaman 04 October 2009

A good poem... and very rapturous... Thanks for sharing ...

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Jean Dament 03 October 2009

Well said & well written. It is very thought provoking. Great job! spelling error-'garantees'-should be 'guarantees' Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 October 2009

Romeo, you are clearly an excellent writer. I appreciate your gift and recognize your abundant talent. You are blessed to depict images that 'sit' on the right emotions.

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2009

I like your attitude! Keep it up! lol Beautiful put Smiling at you tAi

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