In Ecliptic Rebirth Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

In Ecliptic Rebirth

Rating: 4.8


Anger never comes against this true world
Never cry for failure past or present
Like the nature I'm free bird all over
Sun rises and night comes for the next day

In this world I live in my alone thought
No start, no end I keep in life baskets
Like the flowing river it passes all
Since birth I'm slight talker as usual

All are here even the heaven and hell
Holy wine, divine whore and lustful boy
Judgement day, punishment, free from guilty

Only matured time the true convener
Waiting patience the recycling portrait
Everything moves through ecliptic rebirth


25.09.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, September 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel,self,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

All are here even the heaven and Holy wine, divine and lustful boy Judgement day, punishment, free from guilty Realisation of the truth!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 September 2020

Everything moves through ecliptic rebirth. A philosophic thought, both birth and death is still a mystery. Let us hope the best after our death.

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M Asim Nehal 26 September 2020

Very true, real inspiration comes with experience knowledge and maturity. Nicely written..5****

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Varsha M 26 September 2020

Yes I agree with the essence shared in poem about eclectic path sun takes in a year. I agree that it's here only good, bad, judgement and reward beautiful thought.

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