In Each Tear That Falling Comments

Fabulous piece. anjandev roy.

Hi friend, how are you! Yes, you delivered. A tear. A thought. And a beat. At a time. Tear is absolute. And mind can't understand, this is the only way. Heart can never skip the pain, to be suffered. Very nice poem. Best wishes

A great work, Soul. I can hear these lyrics played to a number of beats. Excellent verse, Soul!

Part - 2 I love most lines are....Will you ever understand / When every face you have seen now gone / Will you ever understand in seconds they just memories(you cant) /....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth /....Let only i summarize all in each tears that falling /....Let only i explain to you this way, let me.... Great work really. Full vote.

Part - 1 Your intention to write with different version, different languages reflects in this poem clearly. Considering two version..one is darker and another one is bright version, you have posted here the former version i, e this poem. The story inspired by an Middle east man how he lost all of his family members, parents and relative in one incident in Iraq makes you to create this beautiful poem in a new style. I appreciate the way of your presentation.

What a wonderful poem excellently penned. Poignant yet beautiful song and when read it is mellifluous. Every fiber of this poem has been woven to touch the heart.