So many faces I've seen in the rain
the birth of children in flushes of grain
the palace guards let me walk right through
the sacred garden where I was touched by you
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Never have I fallen so deep in dreams. And not only you, Michael But me, and them, and us all Who ever chose be wordsmith. Nice poem, Michael. Write more! And science has now come To say the more you dream The higher the depth of your IQ
This poem rolls as sweetly as fresh spring water and as soft as the sun upon the face. you have real depth of feeling and I realy enjoyed your verse, many, many thanks!
i liked this piece. easily flow, deep not only in dreams, but in thoughts. thx