Wednesday, April 14, 2010

In Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many faces I've seen in the rain
the birth of children in flushes of grain
the palace guards let me walk right through
the sacred garden where I was touched by you
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Michael Brock
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Emma Adamyan 22 June 2010

i liked this piece. easily flow, deep not only in dreams, but in thoughts. thx

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Marieta Maglas 13 May 2010

wonderful surrealistic poem, thank you for sharing 10/10/10

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Kolawole Ajao 18 April 2010

Never have I fallen so deep in dreams. And not only you, Michael But me, and them, and us all Who ever chose be wordsmith. Nice poem, Michael. Write more! And science has now come To say the more you dream The higher the depth of your IQ

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Kipper Stagg 15 April 2010

This poem rolls as sweetly as fresh spring water and as soft as the sun upon the face. you have real depth of feeling and I realy enjoyed your verse, many, many thanks!

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