Monday, July 27, 2020

In Dreams 35 Comments

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In dreams, I observe the brief shadow plays of youth.
I hear remnants of laughter and birdsong
Streaming freely through a doorway:
Leading back to a summer I vaguely remember.
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Shaun Cronick 27 July 2020

In dreams indeed. A nice slant written and displayed here Dominic, you go the other way not the tried and tested sweet sunshine and welcome warm light methodical approach. And depending on the reader it works, only if the poem is good enough, which this is.10+ and take care and thank you for sharing.

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