Sunday, July 26, 2020

In Dreams 27 Comments

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In dreams, I see us as old men knocking
On heaven's door. But there is no answer,
And we head back along the dust covered
Long, hard road towards cruel purgatory.
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Shaun Cronick 26 July 2020

Brilliant! Never in a million years would I have thought up the germ of an idea, about knocking on Heaven's door and not receive an answer! A clever and enthralling warning poem Dominic. 10+ and again a poem added to my favourites for a future and enjoyable thought provoking reread. Many thanks and hang in there good sir.

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