Saturday, August 20, 2005

In Dream Country Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking the dirt road to the beach,
I hear a faint sound up ahead.
It grows in volume
as I move toward its source,
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Max Reif 23 August 2005

Dear Pradeep, I looked up 'alligator' and 'roar' on Google, because I was never sure if the alligator had roared or swished its mighty tail. The article I found said that alligators really do roar like lions. You still don't have to like it, of course. Maybe I won't either at some point, who knows?

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Raynette Eitel 20 August 2005

And what (says the therapist beside the couch does this mean to you? Would the poem be stronger if you explored what the dream means to you? Perhaps. Give it a try and let me know. The two kinds of animals within one poem are intriguing and haunting. Raynette

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