Wednesday, August 21, 2019

In Disguise I'm Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sometimes
I'm bewildered, perplexed
when I take a disguise
I take the makeup
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Adeeb Alfateh 14 February 2021

The Truth can live naked comfortably without dressing up, making up or taking disguise the truth lives harmlessly but The Lie never can live naked ]]]]] wisely written; grow more wise in your verse; you are true philosophical poet of your country

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 November 2020

Yours is an interesting and thought provoking poem, Mahtab. Being comfortable in one's own skin is a terrific way to be.

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Cynthia Deon 02 September 2019

Incredible write. Naked honesty. Well done.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2019

I take the makeup and the beautifying dress up great you show all instantly tis lovely mb

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

Perplexed! ! Status. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 August 2019

, , , , , , , niceeeee sorry 4 delay i was on a holiday far away ths is good'''

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Akhtar Jawad 22 August 2019

We all are in disguise but our true face is exposed. A thoughtful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 August 2019

Yes, after 'Please Leave This Squabble, it is clear where your reference is. PH is the Site for Poetry. What is the compulsion for allowing non-poetic sentiments under the poetry columns? Why even adverts are allowed? Is it pursuing volume only, not quality, and promote the cause of poems and poets?

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 August 2019

Thank You Sir for your liberal comment. Yes, the non-poetic sentiments, some poet self adverts I think only for pursuing volume, points, rank! ! ! !

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 August 2019

In Disguise.. " The Truth can live naked easily... but The Lie never can live naked... I agree with you if you are also commenting on the goings on.

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Rus Mer 22 August 2019

mahtab VAI, a great realization of inner SOUL n in the case thoughts are same as you did here.. a master piece of PHILOSOPHY of inner soul...

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