Tuesday, October 4, 2005

In Dim Light Comments

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Memory fades
like her body
in dim light
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Ram Krishna Singh
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 04 October 2005

'Memory fades like her body in dim light' shows nothing. How do I know how her body fades, in the first place, to understand the metaphor? The next three lines dont make sense- how to you 'bury' your head? that too In open 'hands'? and too to escape 'noises'.. Why not just close your ears..I just dont get this poem at all (I didnt mark it one though)

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Ram Krishna Singh

Ram Krishna Singh

Varanasi, Uttar Pradesh, India
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