Monday, November 24, 2008

# In Desolation Comments

Rating: 5.0

longing to be held,
cold at night in bed.
Sun whispers, just wait,
don't be desolate
...
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Mamta Agarwal
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Sandra Fowler 08 December 2008

Very consoling to think of the sun warming the windows of the soul. Sometimes brevity is beautiful. This is one of those times. Ten for you. Love, SandraX

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 03 December 2008

Beautful, when 'cold: will recieve the sun! But in bed Cold is alone.

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Raj Nandy 30 November 2008

The sun does warm the body, but the heart and mind may remain cold; Cuddling is an age old therapy, I have often heard it being told! 10! - Raj Nandy

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Bob Blackwell 29 November 2008

The start of a new day, with lots of warmth and love to hold you. Bob

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premji premji 26 November 2008

i see a lovely sunrise after quite a long time thanks......10***

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Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2008

well said, Mamta...i liked this piece...10

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Indira Renganathan 24 November 2008

Desolation unleashed...great..10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 November 2008

Lonely nights are always sad... Andrew 10

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