In Denial Comments

nice. i loved the flow and the question. am i a dad to be? words a guy just don't want to hear. very good, could of been a bit more powerful.

pretty nice imagery! it's like an epiphany when u realize the age difference between ur pals and the new generation, but u know it's the rite of passage that everyone has to go through and, sometimes, u dont want to, but it is inoxerable keep writing my friend!