In Deep Peril Comments

I can't add anything extra to the excellent comment of poetess Nosheen. Top score and to my favourite! !

When we meet with unforeseen disasters, like a stab from behind, we without losing our morale have to proceed the voyayage of life taking refuge in the shatters. When we are doubtful of the purposes of those swimming by our side it is natural to think that the escape is only an armistice and not a final escape. Hope you have surpassed all such dangers.

An optimistic belief always helps us to brave through the ordeals in life.Nice lines with a good message.Thank you

The stab of pain! But, with the hope of getting out of it. Thanks for sharing.

Savior to take one to the shore, I am sure. The poem brings out the possibility of something unexpected happening in an instant. There is always hope and one must gather all courage.

Hidden peril swims in tandem with life and give rise to armistice. A brilliant write.

The poem embodies a short-story waiting to be written, or a fictive autobiography. I like its narrative drive and the marine metaphoric metamorphosis (change of images) . Implicit is the feeling that the peril has been overcome. Thanks. AM

From sailing unimpeded to a perilous voyage, an avalanche of pain is so powerful, so shattering, so disturbing, your words illustrate these circumstances so well. Tossed about by an uncanny fate, exposed and helpless, the final line is for the reader to decide. Brilliantly constructed and riveting and disturbing.10

Is my escape an armistice with life? I see someone swimming by my side A hooded assassin Or a saviour to take me to safer shores! Let us hope the best, and go on believing in a savior, at least we shall die hopefully and pains of death will be minimized. Why to increase the pains by believing there is no savior and once we die we die for ever.

You have touched the cords of pain and sorrow like only a poet like you can do. I wish and pray the one swimming with you turns out the savior and not the assassin. Wish you all the best dear Valsa.

I hope this is not a personal experience. You should be happy in every moment my dear Valsa

Our life is so much like that - the 'unsinkable' Titanic! ! One moment we are sailing safely, the other we are amidst a storm.. No one knows what will take us out.. And when we find a way - there is no way to be certain if it is friend or a foe's hand that we are looking to hold.. A profound write Valsa ma'am.. Thanks for sharing.

What a profound read. Exceptional work. Imagery that pulls the heart's strings. This sea voyage can well be a metaphor for life...full of hidden dangers.10 absolutely.