Sunday, November 24, 2019

'In Control' Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky of youth was perfidious:
it has seduced our soft hearts
with the sublime smile of sunrays,
but it was hiding the rain—
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 November 2019

A magnificently crafted poem, dear Ma’am Mihaela....10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2019

The innocence is always the fool! — but the innocence was powerful! ......Pragmatic expression! An excellent work...........................10/10

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