Saturday, December 3, 2011

In Concrete Comments

Rating: 5.0

A picture frame of frozen pain,
Set in stone to entertain
Eyes reflect the hurt I've kept that's anchored in my brain
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Damian Fisher
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Adeline Foster 22 June 2012

With this poem, it looks like you have great promise as a poet. Well expressed and with none of those pitfalls that dog many of the young writers on this site. Adeline

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Damian Fisher

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