In Communal Riots Comments

Caught betwixt and between Christopher Reilley2 days ago While your intent and emotional journey is admirable, from a strict poetry mechanics standpoint, this piece reads halfway between rhyming poetry and prose poetry. At least half of the rhymes are soft, the meter varies from line to line, and overall there are some structural problems.

Those whose houses were set on fire being made to flee from the country makes a sad note here. A society that has to judge the evils of religion and community alone can enlighten itself. A good write Mehta sir. M D Dinesh Nair, Vijayawada Jul 20,2013

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A VIVID PICTURE OF THE COMMUNAL RIOTS PORTRAYED SO WELL IN YOUR RHYMING POEM, MEHTA, SIR! ENJOYED! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jul 20,2013

brillant Barbara KlopperLess than a minute ago just shows, money isn't everything by a long shot! ! Comment +1 great

Pranav SK1 minute ago great

He was called mad By out side world