Wednesday, December 23, 2020

In Coldness Comments

Rating: 4.7

Fallen yellow leaves on withered leaves
The winter compresses all oddly
Sunlight comes but with not summer heats
Fallen yellow leaves on withered leaves
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COMMENTS
Adeeb Alfateh 14 February 2021

fantastic the winter coldness in your Triolet~ love to read

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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020

NICEEEE.... merry xmas to all PH POETS

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 December 2020

Lovely imagination. Spring blooms right from the withered leaves.

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Varsha M 23 December 2020

This is your second triolet. Pretty beautiful. Well woven. Yellow leaves down waiting for sun of spring to shine and bring new green leaves saying buy to snowy white dress they wore for months.

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