In Chains Comments

Well you certainly know how to squeeze a heart don't you Dave. Goodness this tries to pull the tears out; I could not imagine a life where I am cognizant but without my daughters. A truly heartfelt piece Dave.

Dave, this poem is filled with strong emotion. Great write.. God bless you! :)

Great Poem, The fear of loved ones happiness and welfare spills out of this poem, how can a Father and a Child endure such pain as the panic of the others unknown future without eachother. Nothing is more genuine than the love between Child and Parent which you have expressed so well. Jon

really like this one! x

I love the style you used in this, the angle of both father and son...thx for sharing

this whole poem had me captivated such great writing. I could really feel the emotion in this poem. wonderful work.

a very touching work sir. use of simple words and very meaningfully intense

Very emotional. The despair and sadness is apparent here, and adds to the poem.